Hi! I’m watching it now and I have a few things to notice:

First, the editing it’s absolutely stunning, it’s a really great work! Good job!
In episode 010 around 23:30, while Desmond and Penny are talking, it happens a few times that the screen goes fully black, while the audio is still going, I think it’s a technical problem, as it happens when streaming for google drive
I noticed that you put Desmond’s “mind-travel” to 1996 in episode 058 and not in episodes 011-012… May I ask why? As it is now there’s a hole where Desmond and Penny take their photo and when Desmond leaves her.