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Post #1363117

Author
Neerb
Parent topic
Harmy + Hal 9000 Box Set
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Date created
16-Jul-2020, 2:52 PM
Last modified
16-Jul-2020, 3:16 PM
Edited by
Neerb
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And thanks for the feedback! I still want the foreword to get the points across, but it definitely needs to be less wordy. I ran it by a friend who helped fix a few spelling/visual things, but he didn’t comment on that.

Edit: here’s a slight improvement. Will probably trim even more.

box set collection