My continued attempt at Frankensplicing the hangar scene:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F7lp6IVdh-E
My idea here is to strongly imply that Palpatine is dying as a direct result of what Vader did, he just didn’t die immediately like we all assumed. To make room for that, I had to remove the dyad explanation, which would probably be moved to Rey & Kylo’s long-distance duel since I can’t think of anything else to put there.
Honestly, though, I spent like four hours editing this and it still doesn’t sound good. I need to do something simpler but I can’t think of what.