I think we could come up with a interesting dialogue change for the two stormtroopers commenting on the Knights Of Ren, maybe something in relation to changes or messages we wanna get across in the edit.
Heres some random ideas I thought of.
Stormtrooper 1: “Knights Of Ren”
Stormtrooper 2: “We don’t need help from those cultists”
Stormtrooper 1: “Weren’t those Snoke’s guards?”
Stormtrooper 2: “Not anymore”
Stormtrooper 1: “Snoke’s old guards”
Stormtrooper 2: “It’s been years”
Interested to hear anyone else’s ideas.
I really only brought it up because a) it felt like a quick fix, and b) the dialogue is (in my opinion) awkward and difficult to understand. In keeping with what Hal is trying to accomplish with this edit I think it would be best to either cut the line or leave it as is. I won’t be offended either way.