So, after discussion with @jkimm I’m exploring the idea of cutting out the first trip to Nevarro and starting on Arvala-7. However, there is still some exposition from the first Nevarro trip that I want to retain, particularly from the armourer scene.
Here is the first edited scene… the client… this is the first time Mando will meet the client.
Its only the centre audio channel at the moment to get an idea of how it flows.