I think if you reworked the scenes so this happens after there kiss by the lake (cutting her stopping the kiss). Then maybe keep some of the later scene by the fire where she points out that they can’t go down that path
Post #1360083
- Author
- TheAlaskanSandman
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- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- Date created
- 2-Jul-2020, 9:27 PM