Very interesting. I like the idea of “A day of revenge, a day we all can share” or whatever, then Poe saying “He’s been planning his revenge,” then “The Final Order begins” and Poe saying “He calls it the Final Order… in 16 minutes attacks on all three worlds begins.”
I think you need some sleep, Hal!
Anyways, as I’ve said before, anything is better than Poe’s line. I was also wondering if it would be possible to move Ackbar Jr.’s line “It cannot be! The emperor is dead!” earlier so that it seems like he’s reacting to hearing Palpatine’s voice.