Looks good but is there a particular reason why you didn’t have the Razor Crest jump to hyperspace before the credits? Here’s a rough version:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Slg79VVlnPngh1XhYUtnrtXZ_DUOhsgy/view?usp=sharing
A couple of reasons.
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I didn’t think that a blank space image made a good iris-out shot… it looked better with the Razorcrest in full view.
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Having the Razorcrest slowly moving through space fits with the long, slow journey ahead of them.