Another small idea to improve the pacing of the movie : I think slightly extending (4-5 seconds) the shot of Kylo Ren lost in thoughts on the Death Star would help with that. In the cinema, the scene with Han Solo didn’t completely land emotionally for me because the movie didn’t let time to breathe from the previous scene to this one. So here’s a quick mock-up (I didn’t increase the frame rate with interpolation) :
https://vimeo.com/433415597
(pw: fanedit)
First version is the extended one (I let the previous scene for you to see if it flows well), second one is the movie version. Any thoughts ?