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Post #1358801

Author
Neerb
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For TRoS Edits: Dialogue for the Knights of Ren! Come help! (Released)
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Date created
28-Jun-2020, 4:33 PM

Ap’Lek: 6, 7, 8. 8’s accent is interesting, but… not present in his first line?

Kuruk: 5, 7. 5’s voice might be my favorite in general, but 7’s “lizardman” also fits how comically malicious this dialog is. Wish we could have both somehow, but 5 doesn’t seem to have lines for the other characters.

Ushar: 3, 8

Vicrul: 8, 7. Though I wonder if having dialog here is even beneficial to the scene.

Also, idk if it’s too late for dialog suggestions, but imo this group collectively has way too many uses of the words “traitor/traitorous/betray” and “scavenger/scavenger girl.” For example, I’d definitely go with the “Palpatine” line on Kijimi and the “join your father” line on Exegol, and Ap’lek’s “Traitor!” feels too much like a TFA meme.