poppasketti said:

Gave Ochi’s ship one last shot!
https://vimeo.com/432503419
pw: fanedit

I moved Kylo over a bit, and I reversed the direction of the camera. This way, Kylo is moving out of frame and the focus is drawn towards the ship. I also adjusted the music timing to hit on the wipe.

Looks great Poppa. My only issue is the time frame between Rey running toward the ship, Kylo staring, and the ship flying away. This makes it feel like Kylo was just standing there the whole time it took for Rey to run over to Ochi’s ship and take off. Seems like he would call out to her or maybe use his force powers to prevent the ship from leaving. Even though you did an excellent job, I think it might be better to stick with the theatrical version.