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Post #1358190

Author
Tobar
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
26-Jun-2020, 4:44 PM

I really like that last mock up Hal. The only thing I would recommend, if it’s possible, is to rearrange the battle so that the first shot of Kylo isn’t that close-up shot. It feels jarring to cut from that long shot of the troops to a sudden close-up.

Everything else felt spot on.