Totally loved it.

Rey’s training scene works really well, and I loved the new force vision.
I like how you re-purposed Kylo touching Vader’s mask. That, with his own vision, fits amazingly with the following mask reforging sequence. Now it looks more like a character evolution (at least with the material we have). In TLJ he tried to create something new with Rey. But she refused, so he is forced to go back. Plus, it’s always great when scenes from previous movies are added. It reduces the feeling of an un-cohesive trilogy. Wonderful.
Nice removal of Finn’s “POEEEEEE!”
I liked the restructured Force dialogue between Rey and Kylo. I haven’t followed the thread so much in these days, unfortunately. Where’s the Kylo line “You were eight” from?
I only don’t get what you did with the Dagger. Rey doesn’t do that ridiculous “Oh, the Dagger has the same shape of the Death Star”, and that’s wonderful. But how does she realize where the Wayfinder is? I mean… it’s ok if she can just sense it, but aboard Kylo’s Destroyer you kept Rey saying that she needs to retreive the Dagger. It’s not a criticism or anything. Just trying to understand.
I also like how you moved Palpy’s “Kill me and my spirit wil blablabla”. It was stupid for him to tell Rey, because that’s something that should be used to NOT convince someone to kill him. Plus,.the fact that when Rey and Palpy meet we already know that gives a whole new feel to the scene.
Leia touching Han’s medal works really great. You hinted that she was responsible for Kylo’s vision of Han without having to show her disappear after that. Bravo!

It’s great by its own, but even better as a base for other edits 😉