Well, here’s a new pass of the Ochi ship!
https://vimeo.com/430068518
pw: fanedit
That’s pretty great!
I think the only thing holding it back is that it seems as if the edges of the ship element are a little too soft and overall the ship seems like too much of a blur. If Kylo is out of focus, then the ship should be a little sharper, otherwise the only point of interest is the mountain, which doesn’t seem right.
Just my thoughts!