Well, here’s a new pass of the Ochi ship!
https://vimeo.com/430068518
pw: faneditI stripped out the audio to focus just on the visual for the moment, and I’m curious where you all think this is at. Would love honest feedback!
I rescaled every part of the shot, tweaked the ship and rotation, added some sand blowing texture to integrate the elements, and a few other things. I could also try reversing the direction of the movement so Kylo is moving the other way.
its getting to a pretty good stage, making that ending shot more stationary helps a lot