Ok, I had some spare time and came up with a ROUGH idea on what to do.

The biggest issue I had was cutting out Rey and Fin’s quick conversation. People’s positions change during that and we are then cut with Poe leading the way with C3PO and the rest of them in different spots. It seemed to “choppy” to go from Poe and Rey holding up their “lights” and then cut to the scene they are walking. I needed a buffer, or a way to express some time passed to “explain” their different “line up.”

It hit me. “Wait, after they get out of the “Snake Cave of Dreams” don’t we get the spinning Knights of Ren scene AND another establishing shot right after that!?” And we do!

So you will see that I moved the “Spinning Knights” to make that buffer. Take a look!

Again, it is ROUGH and no changes to music/sounds/etc. Just a rough draft. I also placed a still image of the Rebel base dialogue for a few seconds instead of uploading the whole scene to save time and Vimeo space.

https://vimeo.com/431974515
PW: fanedit