Here’s my take on the dagger scene that I’ve cobbled together for my personal edit. There’s still a bit of abruptness with the following audio cue, but overall I think it works. Maybe you also could use Poe saying “heads up” in yours?

https://vimeo.com/431136774
Password: fanedit

Also, I believe I remember reading a few pages back that Hal or someone else was reluctant to have Leia say “Come home,” since ‘home’ could be interpreted as ‘come die with me’ or something like that? As I was rewatching the whole Kef Bir sequence on my TV to make sure everything flowed properly, I noticed that Han also tells Ben to “come home”, so I don’t think Leia saying it would have any more issue than that does? If anything, it might reinforce the idea that she’s the one behind Han’s appearance.