The second whisper is definitely an improvement! The ONE thing that could make this great (which may not work) is if you could smash cut to the throne for a split second, then a just-as-quick close-up of Rey’s face (if she has a surprised look anywhere during this scene that could be zoomed in on) and then the horses show up
Post #1356560
- Author
- axlanian
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1356560/action/topic#1356560
- Date created
- 20-Jun-2020, 10:46 AM