Here’s a test for the Sith whisper thing. At least the first chunk of it. It’s unfortunately a little cramped since there’s no extra footage to work with and the arrival of the riders comes up suddenly.
I was legit working on this yesterday and ran out of time! Haha! I had something like that. It’s already better.
To help add some kind of breathing room before the rider’s appear, there is that shot of Rey looking at the DSII wreckage after she “pops out the pointer thing” and looks at the wreckage before she then raises up the blade. its about 2 seconds of footage.
With that idea, I would have the whispers be softer when she first looks at it, but then when we see her now look at the death start, the whispers are louder?