I went ahead and mocked up trying to fix Poe’s somehow line… it is only a first version so I’m still coming up with ideas but here is the link. I also removed the “Secrets only the Sith knew…” I’ve never personally had an issue with the line but it might be nice to see what it looked like.
https://vimeo.com/430565762
pw: fanedit
This is good for a v1 edit. I know movies remastered has a video on his channel about his edit of this scene and personally it’s what I would go with probably. Also I think removing leia’s “hiding in the shadows from the beginning” would be better for the scene, not a fan of cutting leias lines personally due to her short screen time but that one is just one I’d cut out.