I went ahead and mocked up trying to fix Poe’s somehow line… it is only a first version so I’m still coming up with ideas but here is the link. I also removed the “Secrets only the Sith knew…” I’ve never personally had an issue with the line but it might be nice to see what it looked like.
https://vimeo.com/430565762
pw: fanedit
Not a bad first attempt, needs some work, but a pretty good start.