Since no one has brought it up, what about trimming the line “Dark science, cloning, secrets only the Sith knew.”
It’s so dumb considering there was an entire war named after clones with no direct relation to the Sith.
Well, it’s nice to have an onscreen reference to the possibility of Palpatine being a clone. For lack of any other way to make that more solid of an idea, I’d be reluctant to remove it.
And as cool of an idea as it is, Palpatine’s microphone reading of “more than a clone, less than a man” just seems to different to fit in.