Making my way through the work print during my lunch break. A few things I’ve noticed so far that I believe could be tweaked. Some have already been mentioned:

I’m an advocate of the “Mustafar Minute” being added I the beginning if possible
Perhaps the removal of Palaptine’s “Kill the girl” line. His plans for Kylo and Rey are somewhat muddled in this film
Removal of Klaud (could someone just put a digital door in the background in the cockpit to paint him out)
I could go either way with Boolio being dubbed over in an alien language
Perhaps the removal of the light speed skipping combo
Please remove the stormtrooper convo about the knights of Ren (at least the secondary troopers reply back)
Please remove “they fly now”
Please remove the flashlight gag or at least the sound when Poe activated it
I’m down for the trimming of Kylo’s tie fighter exploding
If we could make a shot of ochi’s ship leaving the planet after the transport explosion that be awesome; seems like Kylo would pursue Rey woo unless she was a further distance away
I’d cut “I’d like to see your brains in the show”
I’d probably add some Knights of Ren dialogue as suggested

That’s it for now; overall I really am enjoying it. Just think we could trim some of the minor fat still left