Have you considered that dialogue reshuffle someone did for the opening scene, where Palpatine establishes the Dyad as being a thing from the beginning?
Here it is for those wondering: https://vimeo.com/411776713
It basically changes the dynamic between Kylo and Palps, the latter playing the act of an old man about to die, wanting someone worthy to take his throne. He plays into Kylo’s weakness, promising him that he will rule the galaxy with Rey by his side. This is Palpatines trap, once the dyad is brought before him he will restore himself as the one true emperor, springing the trap.
Kylo senses that something is off, so he makes his own plan, turn Rey to the dark side and kill the decrepit clone of Palpatine, he won’t take handouts from anyone.
I was finalizing a version with clearer audio but my computer fried, will take a while for me to get back into the game.
Maybe someone else could give it a go?