You’ve all given me a hell of a lot of feedback on day 1 of the first workprint. I thank you.
I’ve just updated the OP with my intentions at this point in time and the status of each.
If anyone is interested in Muffy’s idea of making it appear that Kylo is farther away from Rey as they fight over the Chewie shuttle, feel free to give it a shot. I didn’t put it on my list, though.