I’ve just finished watching the workprint. I hope this doesn’t sound bad as I know how much work you’ve put into it and I mean this with respect but I feel it’s extremely conservative and too close to the original.
I’m not a fan of Rey being a Palpatine or a Skywalker (without reason) and I feel Ben really needs to stay alive so Leia actually changes his destiny and her vision. Without this I just feel she added to his death rather than trying to save him.