I would adore any good new shots of ships heading toward planets, lol.
Any shots that can be added showing ships in space heading towards or away from planets would be great. I don’t think there are really any shots like that and they are abundant in the PT and OT.
Chewie’s roar as they head to the ice wall hasn’t been touched; it was like that.
Oh okay, it still feels like it needs something… maybe some other feedback here would be good.
I can try to remove “they fly now,” lol.
Thank you lol
I don’t plan to remove Kylo’s exploding TIE. I’d have to gut the whole sequence, and that won’t help the film’s pacing. These Force users just sort of routinely defy reality.
Not the whole sequence, just the 2 seconds at the end of the shot where it goes up in a ball of flames.
That’s a good point about the heroes leaving Pasaana. If that ship can be seen leaving the planet and maybe entering hyperspace, that’d be cool.
Looking at you poppasketti 😉
Nice idea, i’ll play with quieting the music as Rey tells Finn about her vision.
Glad you’re considering, this movie needs some slower quiet moments.
I’m not going to remove DO’s “sad” or “happy.” 😦 😃
Not all, just the one during 3P0’s speech.
I worry that if I remove the line “You are a Palpatine,” it might not be clear. He’s speaking through the helmet and can be hard to hear. I like the dialogue on paper better without the line, though.
“You have his power, you’re his granddaughter” Rey reacts stunned. Then Kylo talks about their bond and lineage. I feel like it flows better if the audience feels confused and scared like Rey.
The line “two were made” harkens back to Lando stating as much earlier in the movie. It doesn’t bother me, but I’m sure it could be removed easily if it bothers most people.
The line just feels redundant.
Any thoughts about making the lightsaber duel uninterrupted?