I just finished watching though the workprint. A/V-wise, I found no noticeable issues.
Overall:
- This film NEEDS a color correction to remove the ugly blue overtones.
- Try to create some more shots of ships approaching/leaving planets in space to help assist the pacing.
Beginning Chase:
- Get Kauld outta there
- Smooth out the Falcon breaking through the ice wall, it seems like Chewie’s roar cut out too early
Passana:
- PLEASE remove “They fly now?!”
- Remove Finn’s secret for Rey that is never resolved (I personally think it is that he knows she’s a Palpatine. That would explain his “You have no idea what she’s going through… I do and so does Leia” comment on Endor. Maybe if this can be made clearer it would make more sense.
- Remove Kylo’s TIE exploding, how would he survive that?!
- I know this was not in the workprint, but I would strongly suggest keeping Rey’s force lightening blue and not yellow
- If possible, try to create a shot of the heroes escaping Passana on Ochie’s ship. It is very abrupt how the next scene is just them randomly in space somehwere when there was a swarm of TIEs
Kijimi:
- When Rey tells Finn about her vision, maybe remove the build of the louder music, it might work better as a quiet moment between them
- Remove D-0’s “Sad.” during C-3P0’s speech, let it be emotional and not humerous
- Remove mention of Finn’s secret during the almost execution if being removed
- Remove Kylo saying “You are a Palpatine.” when telling Rey who she is
Endor:
- Cut out Finn during the fight and have him only watch Rey fly off in Kylo’s TIE
Anch-To:
- Try to tone down how blue Luke looks and use Jonh’s hair fix
- Remove Rey’s “Two were made.” line as we know this and we don’t need extra exposition… sigh
Ending:
- Add Ben’s ghost