This looks really good. I think adding Vader as a post-credits scene though seems a little odd. Ideally, I think you can fade out on the Binary Sunset shot, not iris out. Then fade back in to the Lambda shuttle landing on whatever planet that Venator is on. It can function as an epilogue.
That’s a good idea too. Maybe I will consider that in my next version of edit. Thank you for your feedback.
I really like this idea, I would love to see that!