Being worked on, the music cue is the issue. I can’t wait for that to be audibly polished.
I did a version of this with cleaner audio. I know some people didn’t like my transition, but it should be clean enough to re-work.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-5kuYFOjTgF5FavIgoqgVN0jbtX0zLJZ/view?usp=sharing
Your version sounds fine, but I think the issue is that Hal wanted to use the extended jump without TIEs that skenera and poppasketti worked on. I think ya’ll are probably looking for something more like this with the audio:
https://vimeo.com/427153302
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