Sorry, for not responding. My comments were mostly the first 39 seconds. The planet just feels a bit off. I think it’s a couple of things. The rotation of what looks like they might be clouds is contrary to the rotation of the planet itself. Not a super big issue, but the rotation and cloud movement just seem too fast for that scale. There’s also just a lot going on there. It’s impressive that you were able to put that in, but it just looks and feels a bit off right now due to speed and scale. What about slowing down the planet and cloud rotations?
I totally agree. I tried having the clouds turn the opposite direction to make them noticeable but it didn’t look right. The speed is too fast and i think it should turn with the planet to be more subtle. Also speed of it all needs to come down. A few tweaks so it’s color and brightness match across the scenes too, first to second shot especially needs to be fixed. Going from outside the ship to inside, i thought maybe i should adjust brightness given the light sources. Space being dark and the inside ship having lights, so i thought the first scene should be a little brighter given the lack of other light sources. Will fix all of that though.
Just takes hours to get the render out after tweaking things, but ill fix the planet and get it swapped out. Luckily the other mask are a separate layer so sliding in the fixed planet is easy enough once i tweak it and get it rendered.
Fixed up that droid passing in front of the fire during Theed Attack.
Super appreciate the input and critical eyes, and the time to let me know how to improve things. Thank you 😃