With moving the lines to the first Palpatine scene, it’s just a little unfortunate that he mouths an ‘L’ sound while saying “me.” I don’t know whether this would be easy, but if someone wanted to digitally close his mouth there’s plenty of room in the shot to have the line conclude before we see his face.
It’s not strictly necessary but, goodness, I guess it’s worth mentioning given what all you’ve been able to muster so far!