Here’s that audio if you’d like to try it. I’ve included my final mix of the Kylo scene, the original Kylo scene, and the Rey scene the dialogue comes from to begin with.
The two Kylo scene audios are both synced to begin at the same point, though they differ once the change occurs and end at different arbitrary points.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1GOTD7vJB8OvCGaa1X1uXVUesuf6KFfPW