“I have died before… Kill me, and my spirit will pass into you as all the Sith live in ME(face reveal).”
I almost used that in my mockup. I like ‘I have died before’ and hated to lose it. Honestly, saving ‘You want to kill me…that is what I want’ until the end would provide more information for Rey. It could be followed by him saying she’ll be empress and they will be one…that would provide all the context needed I think for the end to justify her not killing him right away, yet still provide all the setup at the beginning of the movie with the Kylo talk. Good idea!
JEDIT: Updated clips implementing idir_hh’s idea:
https://vimeo.com/424542591
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https://vimeo.com/424542665
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