Post #135011

Author: Yoda Is Your Father
Parent topic: Another Fan-Fic (My sincerest apologies to starkiller) - SW crossover
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/135011/action/topic#135011
Date created: 2-Sep-2005, 1:47 AM

Comments –

I think your intro to this chapter (about hyperspace) is written a little too casually, too colloquially

How is Luke Leia’s ‘Former’ brother?

Why are the rebel alliance acting like dicks?