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I was just about to send clips as Spectre 7 (Jacen Syndulla) but if Jonh wants those honors I would gladly do something else

After being beaten and battered by prequel hate, I promise not to be that to the next generation.

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Hal 9000 said:

jonh, how about you call in as “the Phantom four” or “Spectre four” or some synonym for ghost?

Or “Jedi Haircut” lol

“this is the Phantom four, standing by” i like it!!!
I send it to you today 😃

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Chase Adams said:

We already have a Jacen Syndulla impersonator who provided a voice.

Ah, good to know, ill come up with something else then!

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stevepaynter said:

Movies Remastered said:

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Hal 9000 said:

To be fair, everyone’s always been an asshole to 3PO. “Shut him up or shut him down!” I do think it’s a little awkward how mild this line reading is compared to Poe’s reaction though. You’d expect 3PO to be more hysterical.

I dunno what it is about TROS, I just feel really sorry for 3PO. Everyone seemed really extra nasty to him this episode. 100% didn’t earn the “One last look… at my friends!” line. It’s so being cut. 😃

After 3PO says “One last look… at my friends!” it would be cool to have a short montage of Luke, Han and Leia from the Original Trilogy. This would make is appear 3PO is accessing his memory banks of Luke, Han and Leia instead.

There’s actually a parody of that somewhere. I can’t remember who did it. Maybe HISHE. You’re right though.

I’ve butchered that entire scene but it works once you remove the friend’s line and the repeated dialogue that Poe says in the previous scene. No idea why this is repeated, so removing Poe saying it first gives 3PO’s delivery more gravitas.

So, Poe saying “Are you already their 3PO?” and then 3PO delivers the “…all this time” *dramatic pause

Also, Poe clearly has concussion because he keeps forgetting why they when to see Babu i.e 3PO will have complete memory loss. I think it’s repeated 3 times, WHY? It’s like JJ this Star Wars audience have the attention span of a 3 year old and constantly needs to be reminded of the plot. *eyesroll

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I decided I wanted to put my mental C-3PO inventory to some more good use, so I spent a few minutes screwing around with the scene where 3PO gets his memory back.

THIS IS ROUGH, I haven’t done anything with pruning the audio yet, this is just raw lines used:

https://streamable.com/o5rynb

I really didn’t like the joke about R2 “putting something in his head” as well as the smash cut mid-sentence, so I changed it.

I hope Snooker gets a chance to see my “mistress Rey” line replacement since she was the one who gave me the idea!


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Chase Adams said:

I decided I wanted to put my mental C-3PO inventory to some more good use, so I spent a few minutes screwing around with the scene where 3PO gets his memory back.

THIS IS ROUGH, I haven’t done anything with pruning the audio yet, this is just raw lines used:

https://streamable.com/o5rynb

I really didn’t like the joke about R2 “putting something in his head” as well as the smash cut mid-sentence, so I changed it.

I hope Snooker gets a chance to see my “mistress Rey” line replacement since she was the one who gave me the idea!

Nice job! DO you think restoring 3PO’s memory as far back as Padme is a little too much time lost though?

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I think that’s the ‘canon’ idea now anyway, that his prequel memories returned as well. I like this idea, and hopefully we can make it blend.
What’s the source of the dialogue? Sounds familiar but I can’t place it.

I’m not sure what “Padme’s very first mission” would be, though. First mission of the Clone Wars? Is there even some specific dialogue like “I am going with Mistress Padme to the ___ system” or something to reference TCW?

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Hal 9000 said:
What’s the source of the dialogue? Sounds familiar but I can’t place it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WvrCBRxkB8U

It’s from the episode of Droid Tales that JJ used to help write his script. Watch it, trust me…

I’m not sure what “Padme’s very first mission” would be, though.

I know, makes no sense… I planned on having him say, “…very first mission with Master Anakin” but I couldn’t make it work. I thought it would be nice to have some confirmation that 3PO witnessed what would be considered a very interesting event. 😏

Is there even some specific dialogue like “I am going with Mistress Padme to the ___ system” or something to reference TCW?

Haven’t checked, might be.


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Chase Adams said:

Hal 9000 said:
What’s the source of the dialogue? Sounds familiar but I can’t place it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WvrCBRxkB8U

Haven’t checked, might be.

That’s a really great idea and an awesome use of resources. Perfect clip for that dialogue. I love fanediting specifically for this kind of stuff 😄

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Seems the clip has generated more interest in sending in clips. So once I get a few more I’ll send them along to axlanian. But any after that I’ll just overlay myself and those may not stick out as much.

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I guess that Threepio would be referring to heading to Geonosis in Episode II, even if he stayed on the ship in your edit, Hal, it would still make sense in that context.

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.

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Chase Adams said:

I decided I wanted to put my mental C-3PO inventory to some more good use, so I spent a few minutes screwing around with the scene where 3PO gets his memory back.

THIS IS ROUGH, I haven’t done anything with pruning the audio yet, this is just raw lines used:

https://streamable.com/o5rynb

I really didn’t like the joke about R2 “putting something in his head” as well as the smash cut mid-sentence, so I changed it.

I hope Snooker gets a chance to see my “mistress Rey” line replacement since she was the one who gave me the idea!

Nice job! I like the prequel reference but I think the original joke then smash cut worked better.

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I should be able to cut together a ‘Colossus, reporting in’, or an ‘Ace Squadron, reporting in’ from dialogue from Resistance, since we know they’re there (and can actually see the Aces in a few shots, complete with lovely new ILM-made models), if anybody is interested. I know it’s not folks’ favorite show, but it could be nice to include for some continuity.

Since the novelization (and some of the proposed crawls, along with Visual Dictionary stuff, so frankly, probably earlier drafts of the script and possibly filmed scenes) mention major resistance groups in other parts of the galaxy, cut off from each other by First Order jamming tech, it might be worth coming up with some other continuity-inspired fleet names, outside of ‘Mon Cala fleet’. Maybe ‘Batuu Cell’, the Virgillian Free Alignment, ‘Onderon Fleet’, stuff like that.

It might be fun to include some Legends callouts, too- Iblis Fleet (named after Garm El Iblis, the Legends Rebellion Leader), or just straight-up Katana Fleet.

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jonh said:

Hal 9000 said:

jonh, how about you call in as “the Phantom four” or “Spectre four” or some synonym for ghost?

Or “Jedi Haircut” lol

“this is the Phantom four, standing by” i like it!!!
I send it to you today 😃

Canonically, the crew use Specter as a callsign, with each member being Specter 1-6. The Phantom is the name of the small ship that attaches to the back of the Ghost.

After 3PO says “One last look… at my friends!” it would be cool to have a short montage of Luke, Han and Leia from the Original Trilogy. This would make is appear 3PO is accessing his memory banks of Luke, Han and Leia instead.

No, that’s a horrible idea. The ST is already too obsessed with OT as it is. I’d allow the montage if it includes the Prequels and a bit of the Sequels, tying it all together, but just the Originals would be insulting. I get that has Prequel memories haven’t been restored at this point, but that’s not important.

Chase Adams said:

I decided I wanted to put my mental C-3PO inventory to some more good use, so I spent a few minutes screwing around with the scene where 3PO gets his memory back.

THIS IS ROUGH, I haven’t done anything with pruning the audio yet, this is just raw lines used:

https://streamable.com/o5rynb

I really didn’t like the joke about R2 “putting something in his head” as well as the smash cut mid-sentence, so I changed it.

I hope Snooker gets a chance to see my “mistress Rey” line replacement since she was the one who gave me the idea!

I agree with what Octorox said; the Prequel reference is nice but the original smash cut line was much better.

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Anakin Starkiller said:

jonh said:

Hal 9000 said:

jonh, how about you call in as “the Phantom four” or “Spectre four” or some synonym for ghost?

Or “Jedi Haircut” lol

“this is the Phantom four, standing by” i like it!!!
I send it to you today 😃

Canonically, the crew use Specter as a callsign, with each member being Specter 1-6. The Phantom is the name of the small ship that attaches to the back of the Ghost.

After 3PO says “One last look… at my friends!” it would be cool to have a short montage of Luke, Han and Leia from the Original Trilogy. This would make is appear 3PO is accessing his memory banks of Luke, Han and Leia instead.

No, that’s a horrible idea. The ST is already too obsessed with OT as it is. I’d allow the montage if it includes the Prequels and a bit of the Sequels, tying it all together, but just the Originals would be insulting. I get that has Prequel memories haven’t been restored at this point, but that’s not important.

Honestly, the moment hits just fine for me with no visible flashback.

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Oh I totally agree. I think a montage would be unnecessary and indulgent.

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I just said “this is the Radiant F VII”, which is the first class of ship ever seen in the Skywalker Saga chronologically

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omnimuffin said:

I should be able to cut together a ‘Colossus, reporting in’, or an ‘Ace Squadron, reporting in’ from dialogue from Resistance, since we know they’re there (and can actually see the Aces in a few shots, complete with lovely new ILM-made models), if anybody is interested. I know it’s not folks’ favorite show, but it could be nice to include for some continuity.

Since the novelization (and some of the proposed crawls, along with Visual Dictionary stuff, so frankly, probably earlier drafts of the script and possibly filmed scenes) mention major resistance groups in other parts of the galaxy, cut off from each other by First Order jamming tech, it might be worth coming up with some other continuity-inspired fleet names, outside of ‘Mon Cala fleet’. Maybe ‘Batuu Cell’, the Virgillian Free Alignment, ‘Onderon Fleet’, stuff like that.

It might be fun to include some Legends callouts, too- Iblis Fleet (named after Garm El Iblis, the Legends Rebellion Leader), or just straight-up Katana Fleet.

There’s been dialogue sent in for Kaz and Jaeger so it’d be great to have Doza and the Colossus. There’s also a call sign for the Outrider so it’d be ace to have more Legends easter eggs imo.

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Cinefy said:

I just said “this is the Radiant F VII”, which is the first class of ship ever seen in the Skywalker Saga chronologically

Nice! If only someone actually recognized that name… Didn’t it get destroyed, though? Probably shoulda had a different number.

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Eh, you guys can record and send in whatever you like, be it a canon nod or something to serve as a self-insert.

With thousands of ships, I’m okay with not having many already known ones speak up.

And if you have any history with this site or fan editing, feel free to nod to it. I did so with “9000 crew,” and suggested “Phantom 4” for jonh.

It’s whatever you want it to be, but I encourage making something up yourself.

My stance on revising fan edits.

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I like the idea of sneaking in a prequel reference, but it seems to me like the dialogue implies C-3PO lost all post prequel memories, which at that point is as sad as the complete memory wipe, making the scene kinda pointless and the comedic tone feel inappropriate.

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Yeah those are all good points. Ideally it’d be able to clearly imply ALL his memories are back, and fit in seamlessly to the existing scene audio.

I don’t mind the “put what in my head” line. Just another entry into innuendo SW bingo.

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