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Post #1349215

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krausfadr
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For TRoS Edits: Dialogue for the Knights of Ren! Come help! (Released)
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Date created
25-May-2020, 6:53 PM

axlanian your initial test dialogue has a raw energy to it so I think your main sinister voice might work best for either the character with the most dialogue or the character with the first dialogue.

I really like this one line from idir_hh: (spoken in a disgusted voice)
“Kylo Ren’s little pet is close. I can feel her presence.”

Instead of still chasing the girl, Ben maybe:(spoken in a rage) “You betray us? For a girl from nowhere!”