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Post #1348880

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axlanian
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Idea: Knights of Ren Overhaul - Ideas for Fixing the KoR in TROS
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Date created
24-May-2020, 7:51 PM

The only other scene we could really add dialogue to is this: https://youtu.be/NGx3SjbO68o

I feel like any dialogue would just interrupt the scene, so unless you disagree, we should start coming up with more line ideas for the scenes I’ve done. I can do tests of each decent idea, and then when we have a final list, I can wrangle 5 other people to record lines and then finalize the audio. Does that sound good to you?

Pasaana:

  • “Solo’s Wookiee.” / “I get his teeth.”
  • “Luke’s pet monster.” / (Let’s be real, the teeth line is perfect and doesn’t need other options)
  • “Little Ben’s pet monster.”

Kijimi:

  • “Kylo’s pet scavenger. I can sense her. Spread out.”
  • “The girl. I feel her presence. Find her.”
  • “I sense the scavenger. Find her before she disappears again.”
  • “Palpatine wants the girl alive. Kill the rest.” (Assuming this is after the Palpatine reveal)

Exegol Entrance (in any order):

  • “Well look who finally made it.”
  • “Still chasing the girl, Ben?”
  • “Palpatine was right. You’re weak.”
  • “I hope you’re ready to join your father.”
  • “You turn on us now? So close to victory?”
  • “Traitorous scum. To think we followed you.”
  • “How the Master of the Knights of Ren has fallen.”

Exegol Pause:

  • “What a disappointment.”
  • “Give it up, Ben.”
  • “You’re a disgrace.”
  • “You’ll see your father soon.”

Exegol Saber Reaction:

  • “Oh that’s not fair.”
  • “What?!”
  • “How?!”
  • “Is that Luke’s saber?!”