Here’s a couple thoughts based on this wonderful clip LILLIAN02330 posted earlier: https://vimeo.com/421944019
Picture this:
Crawl
Pan down to TIEs approaching a destroyer (with some tiny specks beneath, subtly moving toward the planet
Aerial shot of a patterned lava flow, with a few troop carriers flying by, either above camera or very closeby underneath, overtaking the camera (could use the forest shot instead)
Troop carriers land, and troops emerge, heading into battle
Distant shot of a lava eruption with trees in the foreground
Kylo Ren is seen on a rampage, and scene goes on from there
That’s pretty awesome. I would only suggest flipping the shots on the troops landing. When they land they’re moving from right to left, but then once Kylo is introduced they’re moving from left to right. It breaks the 180 degree rule and is visually a little confusing. Other than that it looks awesome.