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Post #1348141

Author
idir_hh
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: A ST One-Film Edit (WIP)
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Date created
22-May-2020, 9:28 PM
Last modified
23-May-2020, 4:53 AM
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idir_hh
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If you’re to use visions during the helmet scene, I would go for visions of Luke, Han, Leia and Rey showing Ben compassion, it demonstrates that deep down all he wants is to be loved, setting up his convo with Han.
As for the Deathstar scene I think the establishing shots are fine, the shots are a little stuttery though but as you said it’s a rough mockup. I would however shy away from using anything from the Vader Fan-film as it brakes the flow and tone of the scene, I’d cut from the inner establishing shots to Ben standing on the edge right before the Han convo.