Post #1348132

Author: idir_hh
Parent topic: The Last Jedi: A ST One-Film Edit (WIP)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1348132/action/topic#1348132
Date created: 22-May-2020, 8:55 PM

I really dig everything on Tatooine. The ending is gold.
You’re on the right track with the establishing shots, they just need a little smoothing out.
Personally I would refrain for using any visions or flashbacks, it kinda feels like a greatest hits sequence, but that’s just me.