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Post #1347864

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axlanian
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Idea: Knights of Ren Overhaul - Ideas for Fixing the KoR in TROS
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22-May-2020, 2:01 AM

Glad you liked it! Yeah, let’s try to pin down what phrases we want them to say, then if we could get a few different people’s voices, there could be more diversity without having to create six different effects.

I like the idea of changing that line to “Kylo’s scavenger girl” or “Kylo’s pet scavenger”, I don’t think they’d call him Ren since they’re all Knights of Ren, but I’m not honestly clear on how their names work. But yes, definitely need a force-sensitive line here too.

What do you think about changing the way they recognize Chewie? I’m thinking if they were Luke’s students, they would have known Ben as a kid, and they would have met Cheque through that lens. Maybe instead of “A friend of Luke’s” he’d be “Solo’s Wookiee”? Maybe even “Solo’s Wookiee… from Luke’s Academy”.

Lastly, I really don’t know what lines to use on Exegol. What needs to be conveyed more than anything? That they were with the Emperor all along? That they think he’s a traitor? We need four good lines, and then a consensus on if the “That’s not fair” line is a poor fit.