axlanian wooow! thanks for making that test. I think it shows your ideas are really good and could work well. One of Rogueader’s suggestions is to try and show them as force users. So maybe something along the lines of “Luke’s scavenger girl. I sense her. Spread out” could also work. Or even “Ren’s scavenger girl…” to hint at the disdain for Ren’s obsession with her. If a few of us end up recording our voices with alternate takes then it will gives us different material to play with and really make it sound like different knights speaking. I personally think the “that’s not fair” line is great but hopefully not too comedic.

EDIT: The more I listen to what you did, the more I like it. Really good ideas.