First off, I like how the crawl is coming Hal.

So I had an idea, and I’ve only been toying around with it for a minute but here is what I got so far:

Pan from the crawl to the Mustafar Star destroyer
(Maybe an establishing shot of the TFA star destroyer with Three tie fighters flying towards it)
Move the Hux and Pryde Scene after Jakku (I’m assuming you all are going to cut this scene so that we find out Chewie is alive with Rey) to here. This scene mentions that there has been causalities under the Knights of Ren and that a troop transport had been destroyed, and Pryde comments that he has seen the report… which kind of establishes conflict between him and Hux. (Basically repurposing this conversation for the battle on Mustafar).
Establishing shot of Mustafar (Poppa’s tie fighter shot)
Kylo on Mustafar.