Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren,
haunted by visions in the FORCE, seeks
to find the hidden power of his former
master. Determine to destroy any
threat to his rule…Sorry to be nitpicky, but the last sentence is a fragment. Here’s a quick fix:
Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren,
determined to destroy any threat to
his rule and haunted by visions in
the FORCE, seeks the hidden power of
his former master…
To be even more nitpicky lol… since we’re keeping Mustafar perhaps adding that in at the end
Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER
The galaxy has united after the
heroic sacrifice of Luke Skywalker.
Countless systems have taken a stand
in the name of RESISTANCE.
To suffocate this growing uprising, the
tyrannical FIRST ORDER has silenced all
communication between neighboring systems.
Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren,
determined to destroy any threat to
his rule and haunted by visions in
the FORCE, seeks a hidden power on the planet Mustafar…