No lightspeed conversation, smooth and less abrupt:
I also cut some of Poe repeating himself.
That’s good! Little is lost and it flows well. In that case, would Skenera or anyone else like to visually extend the end of the iceberg escape scene with the Falcon jumping to lightspeed but without TIEs?
I agree the flow is pretty good. What I would do to help simulate Finn is approaching them is to have some leaf stepping sounds that leads up to his appearance.
Also Hal, yes, please someone take out the TIES making that jump would be perfect.
Jonh? Poppa?
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