Edit: Though Hal and DominicCobb make good points about the spy message. Hmm.
I just posted an updated crawl that fixes this issue. š
A good attempt, but I donāt know if itās quite there yet. I donāt really like the idea of a mysterious broadcast in general, and I think referring to Palpatine as a new enemy might be a little too big/confusing a concept for a crawl. Perhaps instead of broadcast itās āintelā or some such. As for what heās looking for on Exegol, Iām still a little stumped in general, but particularly here. It has to be specific enough that we get it, but vague enough that it doesnāt give it away. I just think introducing an element like a third party in the war might be a bit much. But maybe not, I dunno.
The other thing that would have to get changed in this restructuring that I donāt think people have considered, is that the use of Palpatineās theme in the TIE fighter attack in the iceberg would need to be replaced.