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Post #1346726

Author
Knight of Kalee
Parent topic
Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
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Date created
19-May-2020, 12:25 AM

Having watched the rogue cut before reading your last post, it felt a little strange watching Obi-Wan casually appear and do nothing for a while, though I guess it didn’t make much sense either way in the original with Obi-Wan waiting inside the ship until he decides to make his dramatic appearance. I can get used to it, though.

The dialogue seems fine for me, besides some, minor, technical stuff. Can you drop the first “and” in Anakin’s “and you and I could rule the galaxy…”?