Overall, this one was super well done! The amount of work you’ve done with this footage is immense and I can’t imagine it was easy. I’m genuinely curious to see how the pacing of this plays out once it’s complete - it’s almost art house in the way it takes its time and often lacks dialogue.
The one this that stood out to me was when Kuill and Mando are at the Razorcrest saying their goodbyes. Mando says that he could use a crew member with Kuill’s abilities and skills, but we never really get to see those skills in this cut. Perhaps he’s just referring to his ability to capture and tame wildlife? (That doesn’t seem to be a skill Mando would find particularly valuable). Maybe it would be possible to cut this part out.
Looking forward to part 3!
Yes, I tried to take out the conversation about recruiting Kuill as a crew member. I initially replaced it with the conversation about the child’s force use and it worked really well, however, it made the scene when Mando arrives at Kuill’s home far too short, which affected the flow of the scenes.
So, I decided to keep it and assume that Mando could sense that Kuill was technically gifted.