Wow great work on the dialogue, is their dialogue meant to be telepathic? looks very effective.
In this version is there a reason for why Luke has to go? In the last Jedi he dies from draining his force energy from the incredibly taxing feat on Crait, I just think him dying for no reason would kind of undercut his arc in TLJ so I’m also curious about his arc in your version of that film.
As it’s one of the opening scenes of I’m hoping that the same emotion carries through but I have been looking for other dialogue for loop to say “it’s my time” or something like that. If you have any ideas please let me know.